I’ll start by answering your questions. What does this poem say to me? For me, this poem speaks not of love, but of emotional connection and how fragile it can be. What do I think about it? I like the layers- you’ve got beautiful imagery with all the butterfly references and a deep emotion in the story- both of things together make for a wonderful poem.
The title? I find it to be deceiving. Based on the title alone, I was not expecting to read something with such great meaning.
This is my memory of us.
I really like these lines! A great way to start the piece.
I feel we don't have together at the same time,
Even if we have each other in the same place.
I was a little confused upon first reading these lines, but as I read on, I understood. My opinion? Perhaps a tad abrupt.
The flow and line breaks? I think you’ve done a great job in this aspect.
Overall, a very enjoyable read. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing your words.